Completely unrelated, but that is a great sentence, I want that painted as a quote on my wall.
Also, the punctiation seems right to me. But you might be able to use a ";" instead of a comma, im gonna check that real quick.
Answer:
Can I just guess, please? If I can, here you go.
Explanation:
Your sister is tall. She has long, straight, brown hair. She has green eyes that shimmer whenever she opens them after she blinks, light and soft. A lot of boys are attracted to her because of her unique beauty. We love her just the way she is, no matter what she looks like.
Sorry if that was wrong I didn't really know what to do but can you still tell me if any of it was right? Thanks:) (Oh, and also, I write poems. sooooo, yeah.)
Answer:
The tone of this excerpt is taken from-
"The Fall of the House of Usher" written by Edgar Allan Poe
Best word to describe the tone of " The fall of the house of usher " is Sadness and Sorrow. In this describing a person cut off from the world can fall prey to irrational fears and mental illness. he showing the narrator's fear of the tarn. The word which describes the tone is are overwrought and oppressive.
Explanation:
