Identify major areas of concern in the draft essay during revising
Use peer reviews and checklists to assist revising
Revise your paper to improve organization and cohesion
Determine an appropriate style and tone for your paper
Revise to ensure that your tone is consistent
Revise the first draft of your essay and produce a final draft
Answer:
A.) The disparity between the setting and the conflict makes the events even more horrific and disturbing.
Hi Kalea <3
The word that doesn't signal an example is A, conversely. All the other ones are good "for example" type phrases.
Hope this helps, byee <3
