The biggest issue with this is that the first sentence is run-on, you should consider breaking it into smaller sentences, maybe by getting rid of the "and" after describing the mother, replacing it with a period and letting the father get a sentence of his own. Also, you could try "-on how happy the Railway family is. The story also uses detail on how nice the parents are-" something along those lines, just to break the run-on sentence?
This is minor, but at the end "creates a sense of perfection, by describing their house-" the comma before by isn't necessary, and can either be deleted, or you can rephrase like "a sense of perfection. The story does this by describing-"
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According to the principles of financial education, Fred should buy the materials he needs and leave it to buy the pair of designer jeans at another time.
<h3>What is financial education?</h3>
- It is teaching how to use money in a coherent way.
- It is teaching how to organize finances.
- It is teaching about being economically stable.
One of the main principles of financial education is the use of money in necessary elements. Therefore, we can say that Fred should spend the money he received on the materials he needs, as a pair of designer jeans is not something of extreme necessity.
However, financial education says that we should be happy with the use of money. That means Fred shouldn't give up the urge to own a pair of designer jeans. he will just have to wait a little longer, save money and buy them consciously.
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I think that the answer is B. Brackets can indicate a change in verb tense
