I would say the third answer
Answer:
I would change "Martin's and his family" to "Martin and his family's" and "his family" doesn't need to be in parentheses.
I would change the first commentary sectence to "Martin's Grandfather speaks in sioux which is his native language." and go into futher explanation on what he "knows". It's kind of a cliff hanger.
For the second commentary sentence, you should make sure to mention who's grandfather you're talking about if they are multiple in the story. Also I would change the sentence to "The grandfather exhibits his culture while wearing traditional clothing. The traditional clothing is typically worn by people of his tribe."
For the last commentary sentence, I would change it to "The quote states that the males in the family still follow traditions because it will eventually be passed down through generations.
Explanation:
Answer:
Options number 2 and 3 are correct.
Explanation:
These are two different sentences and you already mentioned that the origional sentence had a comma splice, so option 1 is incorrect. A semicolin can always be used for joining two complete sentences, so option 2 is correct. These are two complete sentences, so option 3 is definitely correct. Option 4 has a sentence that has two complete sentences joined together without any puncuation, which is incorrect, so Options 2 and 3 are correct.
