(Navajo)...how your day going
The first step for revising a paragraph with run-on sentences is,<em> 2. "Try to rearrange the sentences so that they make more sense."</em>
When two or more separate clauses (full sentences) are improperly joined, the sentence becomes run-on. A comma splice, which happens when independent phrases are joined by merely a comma, is an illustration of a run-on sentence.
Example: It's almost half past five; we won't make it to town before it gets dark.
A conjunction, a semicolon, or the creation of separate sentences for each independent phrase can all be used to fix comma splices.
Run-on phrases make the text <em>confusing and difficult to read.</em> They have the power to alter the text's intended meaning. As an illustration, I'll use sentences from a caring teacher. as well as a teacher. Who cares? have entirely different connotations.
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The following quotes, shows depressed Holden how we feels.
pg. 98<span> “I felt miserable. I felt so depressed, you can’t imagine."</span>He has suicidal thoughts
pg. 104<span> “What I really felt like, though, was committing suicide. I felt like jumping out the window. I probably would’ve done it, too.”
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