Read the paragraph and answer the question that follows: The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens. The loud and st
eady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger. If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives. With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately. Which sentence should be revised to eliminate redundancy?
The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens.
The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger.
If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives.
With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately.
Just take what you are going to talk about it your paper and summarize it. Make sure to put Down's Syndrome in your thesis though since that is the main topic.
