Old English developed from germanic tribes
For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
Nabokov’s favorite word is mauve
The two reasons to paraphrase a text rather than summarizing or quoting it:
- To eliminate irrelevant details.
- To avoid plagiarism.
<h3>What is paraphrasing?</h3>
Paraphrasing is known as a process of restating the meaning of a text or passage using your own words. Paraphrasing helps one to understand the text personally. This is because the writer restates the text in his/her words.
We can see that paraphrasing will help eliminate irrelevant details and also help to minimize or avoid plagiarism.
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