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The original staff was fired and he rehired new people except for the new gardener because he wanted to be discrete about daisy visiting him Gatsby wanted to keep his affair private from the outside world and keep daisy's “good name” intact
I am guessing that you are wanting me to fix this sentence, but if you want more help I will need more information.
I would make this sentence better by changing the word 'tinkered' to repaired. It is a more professional word and implies that Nelson actually knows what he is doing.
Hope this helped! If you need anymore help just let me know! :)
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The Great Depression --> the way the stock market crash affected people
The Dust Bowl --> a migrant child's struggle moving west
Photography during the Depression --> a profile of a famous Depression-era photographer
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the answer to this question is b
A) Leaves out a comma before Walt (i.e. this weekend, Walt?)
B) Is not a direct sentence. The speaker is not talking to Abraham Lincoln; she/he is only talking about him.
C) Uses the comma correctly in a direct address. The speaker is saying something directly to Denise and there is a comma directly after her name.
D) Again, the speaker may not be talking directly to the boys but simply to the parents of said boys.
I hope this helps!!