Question

I need help writing a quick transition between paragraphs on my essay. (P1) As of 2014 worldwide, “907 million people” cannot read or write a single sentence (Literacy 1).
P(2) “By the end of the first grade, children displaying difficulty learning to read begin to feel less positive about themselves than when they started school."

Answer 1

I believe that starting p2 with the transition "Sadly, by the end...." would work in this case.

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