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AleksandrR [38]
3 years ago
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Please re-write this sentence from my story I wrote (give it better action verbs): "I could not help but feel sadness but was no

t really feeling all that sad, like perhaps if things were different and we had a more normal relationship, I could grieve for my mother like I had seen so many others do. "
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riadik2000 [5.3K]3 years ago
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I could not help but feel dejected, perhaps if things were different and we had a habitual relationship, I could grieve for my mother like I had witnessed of multitude.


idk, its somethin' haha. good luck ;)

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