From this story we can choose the next portions:
<span>“One sky, towards which we sometimes lift our eyes.” you can change lift to elevate cuase is more understandable
“we head home, through the gloss of rain or weight of snow.”
lets change through to admist which seems a better expression
“Or the impossible vocabulary of sorrow that won’t explain,” I changed impossible to unreachable cause it fits better.
“Who couldn’t give you what you wanted.” You can change wanted to recieved. to denote the complete action of a gitf given
"</span>My face, your face, millions of faces in morning's mirrors,<span>
</span><span>each one yawning to life, crescendoing<span> into our day" change crescendoing for uplift to do it more understandable</span></span>
In my opinon i do not belive in god because what has he done for me or you because he did not put food in my mouth my parents did and he did not get my parents busted there butt to feed 5 kid so i word say that god is irration and not relavent because everything that happened in our life happened in our life is because our parents or us doing it for our selfs this is my opinon okay in not trying to be rude to any one who belives in god
Ethos in a persuasive argument is the credibility of the person making the argument so it would be D. For future reference, think of commercials with the people saying that the product being shown worked well for them.
