(1) On June 18, 2010, Universal Studios' in Orlando, Florida, opened a new attraction. (2) It's called "The Wizarding World of H
arry Potter." (3) Guests can now walk through the gates of a life-size Hogwarts Castle, visit Hogsmeade shops, and walk past Hagrid's hut. (4) However, the park has rides based off the Harry Potter series. (5) Many Harry Potter fans are excited about the opportunity to visit the theme park. (6) Some fans are even going dressed up in costumes. Read the following sentence from the passage.
(6) Some fans are even going dressed up in costumes.
Which of the following revisions would make sentence 6 more specific?
A. Some visitors are even going dressed up in certain costumes to walk around the park.
B. Some visitors are even dressing up in costumes to look like characters from the series.
C. There are even some visitors who are wearing different kinds of costumes to the park.
D. Many Harry Potter fans are even going to the park dressed up in funny costumes.
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A is the correct answer because if you're topic is your hero, then you won't go looking for a subject that interests you and an audience. However the other 3 options are good ideas.
