Question

I know I need to fix something but I dont know what. What should I change?

Answer 1

I don't think that the poems needs more things, but I do think that you should change the title , I don't really know to what though . The poem is beautifulx100 , I love this part "the intense moon as your only light , to find your way out of the dark" , the ending was beautiful , there was no hope but you still somehow made the poem sound not hopeless.