The writer uses formal language.
(MAYBE The language is informal and humorous.. but I'm think no to that one because it uses the word humourous.)
This paragraph is super... choppy. It needs to be more fluid. Also, the hook is, well, not present. They have a good start with "Growing flowers is one of my happiest childhood memories." You should build more on this idea of why gardening makes you happy. Through these memories you could share what you gain from gardening, and why you should stop thinking just about the time it takes but also the profit you can earn. To get rid of this "choppiness" you connect through the memories.
Hope this helps!
Answer:
Historical communication took longer, modern communication took less time and is easier to send
Explanation:
Ponyboy feels a sinking feeling when he sees the other greasers. ... A policeman stops them, but Ponyboy feigns an injury, and the officer gives them an escort to the hospital. Ponyboy and Dally find Johnny dying. Johnny moans that fighting is useless, tells Ponyboy to “[s]tay gold,” and then dies.
