Reword.
If you're paraphrasing something, you are not using the exact words that the original author/speaker/etc used, but you are retaining the important pieces and gist of the passage.
Answer:
The central message should project a percentage achievement based on what they have done against their target along each items of their strategy document.
Highlights areas where there are performing and make recommendations while calling for consistency/improvement in the areas where there are already performing high.
Explanation:
The presentation should be more graphical showing their percentage achievements along each strategic item. Another graph for projections showing the impact of your recommendations on their past performance.
<span>The concern with getting daughters married into good families pervades Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice and forms a large part of the social mannerisms that the novel mocks. The lines in this excerpt that one of the Bennet parents make an ironically false claim about having gone to great lengths to achieve that goal is to be present in almost every party the Bingley and Darcy proposes.</span>
It is totally a dictionary
This is punctuated correctly.
"Marshmallows are my favorite snack" is a complete sentence unto itself.
The comma instead of a period shows that the sentence spoken is part of the whole sentence, which includes the speaker (she) and a word to describe how the speaker said it (explained).
