Answer:
Newsboys
Explanation:
They see kids selling food and think that they could do that using their newspapers.
Answer:
I cant answer without the text bro
Answer:
footstep
Explanation:
Without the word footstep, we would be not sure what she was saying. Enwrapped also contributes but its footstep
For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
