Even it is true that Jim would have an important perspective of the story because he also had many hard times and feelings, it would not be that inspirational, because Della's suffered a whole lot more than Jim. So Jim's perspective would obscure the significance, intention and strenght of the story. One of the reasons why O.Henry chose Della is because as a woman would tell the story with more sentiment and with the appropiate feeling
A good introuduction ( start by hooking the reader), Make it descpriptive but no overboard, dont stray from your topic, and check an punction and grammar, ( I suggest Grammarly)
