The men begging for money on the street helped build and protect our country, and they deserve a better lot than they have been given.
I were famous I would want to be a singer I would want to be famous for this because I enjoy expressing myself through the music and since I’m not that good at expressing my feelings I help people understand what I am feeling and people can also relate to what I’m feeling through the music.
I feel like you should capitalize Industrial Revolution. it just doesn't look right if you don't capitalize it.