1answer.
Ask question
Login Signup
Ask question
All categories
  • English
  • Mathematics
  • Social Studies
  • Business
  • History
  • Health
  • Geography
  • Biology
  • Physics
  • Chemistry
  • Computers and Technology
  • Arts
  • World Languages
  • Spanish
  • French
  • German
  • Advanced Placement (AP)
  • SAT
  • Medicine
  • Law
  • Engineering
liraira [26]
3 years ago
15

Can someone please revise my poem for word choice and rhyme patterns? I feel like my rhymes aren't really good, and I would like

some help in correcting them. Thanks!!
Even when the teasing vines
Force me, submerge me in the adhesive oil,
She's there to lead the way,
Her golden scruff as bright as foil,
The path, narrow and taunting, is unfrightening
As long as her leaning head maintains my balance.

What will I ever do as the tangled hair grows light,
As her gentle cranium becomes lifeless, lowered, long;
I wish to never visualize that future, and hopeful I never will, for if it is reality, I Could not tread through the ghostly forest any longer, the ghosts shall devour my shriveled songs.
English
2 answers:
alexandr1967 [171]3 years ago
7 0
Well one thing i would say make sure the words you are using actually makes sense. you should replace foil with something since foil doesnt shine it just reflects.

sergey [27]3 years ago
7 0
When teasing vines
Force me,submerge me in the captivating oil
She is there to lead the way
Her golden scruff bright as the sun
The path,narrow and taunting, seems unfrightening
As long as she helps maintains my balance
What will I do as the her tangled hair grows light
As her gentle features becomes lifeless
Wishing never to visualize that future, hoping I never will, for if it shall become reality
I will be lost in this ghostly forest, forever being lost
The ghost shall devour my songs of life


You might be interested in
A A
xz_007 [3.2K]

After reading "How Santa Claus Found the Poor-House," by Sophie Swett, we can say that the quotation that gives evidence to Part A is:

C.  "He had become so accustomed to looking for a bright side that he could find one when you wouldn't have thought there was any there." ( Paragraph 28)

In Part A, we were asked about how Gobaly's attitude changed while he was shoveling snow.

The answer is that he was initially upset that it would not be a happy Christmas. However, his conversation with Methuselah reminds him to be positive.

Methuselah is weaker than Gobaly, so Gobaly feels very protective of him. They are both orphans who live at the Poor-House.

Whenever Gobaly is around Methuselah, he looks for the bright side of things so that his friend will be happy.

In their conversation about Christmas, Gobaly is trying to cheer Methuselah up. That is what makes his attitude change.

With the information above in mind, we can choose letter C as the best option.

Learn more about "How Santa Claus Found the Poor-House" here:

brainly.com/question/20461169

8 0
2 years ago
How does a linear array help one organize synonyms or antonyms? A. It creates a list of words with similar or opposite meanings.
Zolol [24]
The best answer is that a linear array helps someone organize synonyms or antonyms by letting him/her organize words according to nuance of meaning. Nuance of meaning by definition is a slight difference in meaning.

Hope my answer has come to your help.
7 0
3 years ago
Read 2 more answers
In a well-constructed paragraph, discuss the moral dilemma in "The Book of Martha.” What does it reveal about Martha’s behavior
andrey2020 [161]

Answer:

In "The Book of Martha,” Martha is faced with a moral dilemma about how to improve humanity. She can make any change she desires. Martha tells God, "I was born poor, black, and female to a fourteen-year-old mother who could barely read. We were homeless half the time while I was growing up.” Martha grew up to become a successful writer. As a result of this, Martha understands that people need to have a sense of satisfaction and accomplishment in order to live a good life. Thus, her response to the dilemma is to provide people with a sense of personal satisfaction in their dreams in the hopes that this promote peace and well-being. One theme of the story is that  imagination has an impact on reality. Martha believes that people’s dreams transform them. As the story progresses, and Martha gains confidence in her choice, Martha’s image of God changes, and he begins to look and sound more like her.

Explanation:

i did it

7 0
3 years ago
Read 2 more answers
You are attending a public speaking workshop. After each speaker delivers his or her speech, the class is required to offer feed
Mariulka [41]

Answer:

Animate your body

Explanation:

Animate your body defines that it is the type of non-verbal message that is through the action which needs along with the verbal information that is orally to give the presentation in an effective manner. It indicates the way you represent your message to the audience with the help of gestures.

Now, According to the situation Class is looking for feedback from the audience, the last speaker kept her hands in glue, being an audience I was listening to every speech, the last speaker should be energetic, should be clean and in formal dress also need to use her hand gestures while giving a speech and walking should be there, a bit.

This will help to attract the audience to get engaged in her speech.

5 0
3 years ago
Which viewpoint does Faulkner convey in the excerpt?
xxTIMURxx [149]

Answer

dont know the answer

Explanation:

6 0
2 years ago
Other questions:
  • I'm stuck on what to write for freedom similes and metaphors? help? Thanks!
    9·1 answer
  • How do you do an experiment
    7·1 answer
  • 20 POINTS PLEASE ANSWER
    9·1 answer
  • We drink lemonade is a noun
    14·2 answers
  • One way a reader can see that this passage is a play is
    14·1 answer
  • Which function in outlook allows you to organize contacts by placing them in different locations?
    8·1 answer
  • 'the cover my new book ai as soft as velvet'<br>metaphor or simile?<br>what 2 things are compared?​
    7·2 answers
  • What is a narrative?(1 point)
    14·2 answers
  • What does the phrase mean, 'And from the bottom of the sea drwas up his daily bread' means?​
    11·2 answers
  • What experience does aleksandr solzhenitsyn describe in the excerpt from the gulag archipelago?.
    13·1 answer
Add answer
Login
Not registered? Fast signup
Signup
Login Signup
Ask question!