The reconstruction plan, developed at a meeting of the participating European states, was drafted on June 5, 1947. It offered the same aid to the Soviet Union and its allies, but they refused to accept it,[8][9] as doing so would allow a degree of US control over the communist economies.[10] In fact, the Soviet Union prevented its satellite states (i.e., East Germany, Poland, etc.) from accepting. Secretary Marshall became convinced Stalin had no interest in helping restore economic health in Western Europe.<span>[11]</span>
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Paragraph 1: Second sentence would sound better if you added how trade even helped develop some of the empire's economies. For example, the Tang Empire thrived off of the silk China traded on the Silk Road. "Trade even spread religion all around the world" Specify, 'like the religion of_____' (HINT: Buddhism). 'Trade to and from Rome led a lot of people to turn to Christanity and Catholicsm' I suggest not saying turn to but convert. Last sentence does not make sense after talking about how interactions between traders led to converstion of different religions, maybe move it to the tip after you say 'anything from crops to even their langauges' then add a transition sentence after that so things flow better.
Paragraph 2: 'One of the more popular trade routes is called The Silk Road' replace popular with notable. 'The Silk Road was lengthy, spreading from Persia to China and all the countries in between.' I don't think lengthy is the right adjective, try just saying long or large. Also, I thought The Silk Road was from China to Rome/West Europe? Fact check please. 'The Silk Road was very benevolent in trade and allowed many countries to exchange goods' The idea of countries really did not exist at this time. Try replacing countries with regions or civilizations.
Paragraph 3: 'Without the trade business, we wouldn't be able to have a wide range of items.' Replace trae business with trading network. You also say 'we' should first person pronouns be used in an essay like this? Check with your teacher. Overall, nice job!
Segregation had been considered constitutional under the lemma "separate but equal" during the Flessy vs. Ferguson case in 1896. The decision enacted by the US Supreme Court stated that the provision of rights guaranteed by the First Amendment to the US Constitution was secured for every US kid, as long as the educational facilities were equal in terms of quality, no matter whether white and black children were separated or not.
Fortunately, the decision subsequently reached in Brown v. Board of Education in 1954 overturned the previous convictions and decisions of the Supreme Court, arguing how separating children solely in terms of race would trigger feelings of inferiority and discrimination in US black kids ans this would, in turn, affect their school performance and hence, it declared segregation to be unconstitutional and urged schools to remove such system.
Well, according to a Crashcourse episode, the Spanish would have gotten poorer because they couldn't extract resources from their territories.
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I think the answer might be a hair salon lady, you know, the people that do your hair. I say this because they obviously work with hair a lot and they get to interact and work with people, so it matches with both her passions. Hope this helps! :)
