D. Casual style
The cover letter includes some informal words that come across as casual and unprofessional, reflecting poorly on the job applicant. Some of the informal and casually styled words and phrases used include:
- "surfing the web"
- "I'm"
-"really would"
Can you explain a little more?
Prereading, Reading, and Review
Brainstorming is thinking of idea's and organizing them into subtopics.
This can help organize the research paper so that you know what you're ready to write about. Without the brainstorming method, you'll wander into other topics and might forget what you think is crucial to inform the readers about.
Answer:
However, it is not only the hotel’s location that makes staying here a pleasant experience. Free WiFi makes getting online a piece of cake, whilst every room is en-suite and comes complete with a lockable safe for your valuables, and possessions. Although we are located within easy reach of the city’s major tourist attractions, the area surrounding us is actually one of the quietest sections.
Explanation:
I have added spaces to your paragraph for easier reading.
Question:
However, it is not only the hotel’s location that makes staying here a pleasant experience. Free WiFi makes getting online a piece of cake, whilst every room is en-suite and comes complete with a lockable safe, for your valuables, and possessions. Although, we are located within easy reach of the city’s major tourist attractions, the area surrounding us is actually one of the quietest sections.
We do not require a comma after the word "safe" as bolded as it is a complete phrase on its own with "for your valuables".
Sentence structures with "Although" do not require a comma after "Although", but rather after the entire phrase. Since we already have a comma after the phrase "we are located within easy reach of the city’s major tourist attractions", the comma bolded can be removed.
The final answer after the editing would be:
However, it is not only the hotel’s location that makes staying here a pleasant experience. Free WiFi makes getting online a piece of cake, whilst every room is en-suite and comes complete with a lockable safe for your valuables, and possessions. Although we are located within easy reach of the city’s major tourist attractions, the area surrounding us is actually one of the quietest sections.
