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"How can I help?"
This was the only thought on young Pablo's mind after the hurricane as he looked at the fallen trees, [1] toppled power lines * and homes without roofs in <u>their</u> town.
"Is that bicycle <u>yours?"</u> asked Mr Sanchez.
Pablo said, "Yes, <u>it's</u> mine."
"Then jump on <u>its</u> seat and ride to the community <u>centre</u> [2]. <u>Y</u>ou can help make ten thousand ham and cheese sandwiches for folks who were evacuated."
Explanation:
[1] comma should be added to separate the list since there are more than two items.
* you may wish to add a comma here too depending on whether you follow US or UK conventions
[2] you don't have to change this if you're using american spelling
i hope this helps! :D sorry if i missed anything.
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yep true! Thanks and have a great day! ^_^
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omggg why is people on here sooo talanted .. rose had alot going on try using more suspense to really grab the readers attention... also throw curve balls so it wouldn't be too predictable... don't be shy to make some people mad ...when you end the story make an unpredictable ending
