May I ask for some further clarification? Is this meant to be a essay about events in your life, or just about your likes and interests?
One point would be Grammar
Fellowship’s reaction was a bit
surprised because he claims that he knows the pilgrimage very well, and
that he accompany Everyman on his journey. I am hoping that this answer has satisfied
your query and it will be able to help you in your endeavor, and if you would
like, feel free to ask another question.
