Imagine that you are living in America during the 1750s and employed as an advertising agent for the thirteen original colonies.
You are hired to write the text material for a brochure on one of the thirteen original colonies. Research one colony of your choice, using at least three research sources, and use your information to write the text material for your brochure in such a manner that encourages people to settle in the colony. It is important to think about the political, economic, social, and geographic reasons for settling in the colony.
i chose New York. It is supposed to be 250 words.
this is what i have so far. how is it thus far, how can i make it better and what kind of other stuff should i add to make it longer?
Being that New York is not dominated by a specific religion, residents are free to worship as they chose. it gives way to religious freedom for Quakers, Catholics, Lutherans, Jews and others.
New York is dominated by forests, rivers, mountains, and lakes. The forests provide a large amount of lumber, livestock and a wonderful place for harvesting furs. Also being close to the Great Lakes makes New York a great place for fishing and whaling. It is a mild climate with warm summers and mild winters.The Colony has great soil because it is near the Atlantic region, suited for farming certain plants like rye,maize,oats,barley,Potatoes and grains. There are also plenty of products like plows,kettles,locks,nails,and more that are able to be produced here.
