0: change ‘am’ to ‘is’
1: change ‘they’ to It
2: change ‘the’ to ‘an’
3: change ‘climb’ to ‘climbing’
4: change ‘so’ to ‘and’
5: change ‘suspend’ to ‘suspended’
6: change ‘or’ to ‘and’
7: change ‘my’ to ‘that’s’
8: change ‘in’ to ‘on’
These lines are an example of a) Pathos.
Pathos appeals to the emotions of a given audience in order to strengthen an argument. It uses logic, but draws upon emotion. This passage from The Declaration of Independence depicts the King of England as a cruel and unfit leader. It uses logic to enhance this argument, but its intent is to use emotion.
