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I think the most helpful way to create a more formal and professional tone is to eliminate the informal language.
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The paragraph has phrases like "<em>off the hook</em>", or homeless "<em>peeps</em>" that are not accurate for a formal request. If those words or phrases are changed for more formal ones, the whole request will sound more serious and important.
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Uh.. Choices please?
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I dont see any choices so I can't really help... Sorry!
B. Hall knew that the outrage would help Britain's cause
