I sprayed one if my top favorite scents on and i let my hair down
The poem has a different understanding once you take into account she committed suicide soon after. In the poem she talk of being dead in the figurative sense and hiding it with smiles of accomplishment and illusions. Instead after you see she meant she was dead inside and when she talked of her feet saying we've gone to far she means she's tired of living. And again she talks of flowe petals closing as she closes in on herself.
My sweet,quiet father surprised us with his outburst yesterday
Your only describing the father with 2 words. A comma is only necessary if you were using 3 words
The purpose of an essay is determined by your goal as a writer, as well as your subject matter.
