Answer:
She met her friends in the lobby of the hotel, and they headed over to the pool for a cool, refreshing swim.
Explanation:
The correct option is the first one. This revision is the most concise, free of redundancy. This means that everything necessary is said with no unnecessary words. When we say that someone is in the lobby of a hotel, we already know that they are on the bottom floor. There is no need to include both <em>lobby </em>and <em>bottom floor </em>in the same sentence. The first sentence is the only one that contains only one of these phrases/words.
Another issue with the original sentence is the incorrect use of commas, and another reason the third option is incorrect is awkward word order.
Yep, that's basically the whole task. To change the passage to become more 'upbeat', yet still share similar words to the previous words, the following could be changed to...
trudged= plodded
shuffled= staggered
scrutinised= questioned
sparse=meagre
closed in= confined
anxious= eager (Although eager and anxious generally do not share a similar definition, in this context they do as 'anxious' is used to describe being excited to do something, and share the same meaning of 'Very eager or concerned to do something or for something to happen'
pried= wrenched
confronted= suddenly exposed
puzzling=baffling
something=remarkable
used=castoff
questioned=pondered
anxious=uneasy
Answer: Good deeds are the means to reach a higher plane and likewise bad deeds lead to destruction and doom
Explanation: It is like Karma. Good deeds are the means to reach a higher plane and likewise bad deeds lead to destruction and doom