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dear sarah,
hey, I was planning on volunteering at the animal shelter as it would be good to put on my resume. I was wondering if you would be willing to come along and help if you have time.
sincerely, Tanna
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To fix the sentence, change "," after 2004 to ";" and remove the "and" before scientists. It makes the sentence sound better.
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