Read the sentence.
Walking can be a form of exercise just as effective as running as far as health benefits and might even be a better option for some people with certain health problems.
Which revision corrects the wordiness and redundancy in this sentence?
For certain people, walking can be a better form of exercise than running if you have certain health conditions.
Certain health problems that some people might have make walking better than running because they can get the same health benefits.
Walking has many of the same health benefits as running and might be a better option for people with certain health conditions.
Walking can be just as effective as running and maybe even better for certain people with certain health problems
Answer:
Walking can be just as effective as running and maybe even better for certain people with certain health problems
Explanation:
According to the given sentence, the speaker is trying to convey the idea that walking can be an effective form of exercise that can be used in place of running for some people with certain health conditions.
Therefore, the revision that corrects the wordiness and redundancy in this sentence is option D. This is because, it goes straight to the point without unnecessary repetition which causes wordiness and eliminates redundancy.
Okay. what?
1: what story
2: at least say the name of the story!
3: just read the story and explain what part gets your emotions the most.
Answer:
The best revision of the sentence is "The lawyer presented a clear argument to the jury (it was unbelievable how influenced they were by his case) in hope of winning the trial."
Explanation:
This sentence includes information that is not determining to its meaning, this information can be set apart by the use of parenthesis.
One of the uses of parenthesis is to enclose detail information or information that adds detail to the general sentence or clarifies pieces of information in the main part. It separates defining from non defining information.
