use specific, strong verbs in place of general ones use dialogue to develop the character use descriptive words that appeal to the reader's senses use setting to place the story for the reader use active voice to show instead of tell the reader
use specific, strong verbs in place of general ones use dialogue to develop the character use descriptive words that appeal to the reader's senses use setting to place the story for the reader use active voice to show instead of tell the reader.
It depends on what he is saying. If he says rude things then you can conclude that he is being rude. Let me know what he is saying and then I can help you.
