I beilive it’s either c or d
Answer:
MAKE NO CHANGE
Explanation:
There is nothing wrong with the punctuation of the sentence we are analyzing here. First, let's take a look at the colon. When we need to introduce a long list of items, a colon should be used right before the list begins. That is exactly what we have here. The speaker placed a colon before listing the locations to be visited.
Now, we can usually separate the items in a list with commas. However, in this case, not only do we have long names for each location, but we also have the "location of the location". That is, a certain museum is located in a certain city, and to separate the name of the museum from the name of the city, we must use a comma already. For that reason, when we name another location, a different one, we should use a semicolon instead of a comma.
The answer is: [A]:
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"<span>combine related sentences with transitional words" .
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Note:
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Choice [B]: "</span><span>begin all sentences in the same way" ; is incorrect. To the contrary, beginning all sentence in the same way is NOT recommended and would worsen sentence flow in an essay. It is recommended that one NOT begin ALL sentences in the same way but rather to vary sentences and use supporting detail.
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Choice [C]: "make sentences a similar length" ; is incorrect. To the contrary, sentence VARIETY is encouraged.
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Choice [D]: "write only complex sentences" ; is incorrect. As mentioned directly above, sentence VARIETY is encouraged. Furthermore, writing only complex sentences would like confuse or distract the reader and make it difficult to comprehend what is written.
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Choice [A]: "combine related sentences with transitional words" ; is a great way to improve sentence flow in an essay (if done correctly); and keeps the reader engaged — and helps organize the essay, as well.
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Thus, "Answer choice: [A]: "combine related sentences with transitional words" ; is clearly the best answer — and the correct answer!
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