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aleksklad [387]
3 years ago
7

Rewrite the following paragraph to improve its unity and coherence. As you do this, consider the following:

English
1 answer:
Alex Ar [27]3 years ago
5 0

Answer:

My eight-year-old brother is a pest. He has black hair, he' short for his age. He gets up early on Saturday mornings and wakes everyone up because the cartoons are on, on weekdays, we have to make him get up to get ready for school, he waits until the last minute to put his clothes on. When he doesn't get his way, he whines until he gets it. He's a spoiled brat, he always gets his way with our parents. This is the boy I have to put up with everyday.

Explanation:

You don't have to mention his age or his height more then once, and there are  periods and commas where they're not supposed to be. and shorten the sentences the best you can because you won't keep someone hooked to what you've written, keep it short.

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  Sometimes life takes an unexpected turn, at the time it might not seem as if it were for the better, but for the worst, but I do know that usually, you won't figure this out till later in your life. An unexpected turn has occurred in my life, and if I'm being honest, I'm not enjoying even the thought of it. My family and I have moved from Virginia to Texas. Some people don't mind moving, and might even be excited about a fresh start, but what if you don't want that? What if your content with where you're at? I have grown comfortable in my old home, the town I have grown up in, the friends I have acquainted with. It hurts me that I have to leave all of these things I hold dear behind.

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