For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
Human activity has destroyed the nests of leather back sea turtles on beaches around the world. Consequently, the leather back population has dropped in the last century.
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This question doesnt contain all the needed information to answer. please come back with the FULL article.
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Don't be sorry that's what the website was created for. The magical music was much to loud.
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You can use any words as long as it makes since and has the same sound at the begging. magical music much
