Where is the 1st paragraph?
Answer:
it's all written in present tense so it's WILL 2 - 6
I think that a good thesis statement would help and creative hooks to keep the writer hoook and not get bored and keep reading the story. Also add transition words to connect ideas in the creative writting.
"Look, I don't want to argue but cats are better than dogs."
"My dogs love to argue with each other"
"Mom, why does Jason and Ally argue so much?"
