Answer:
The phrase that makes this thesis statement wordy is: electronic mail.
Explanation:
Wordiness refers to making something longer than it should be, that is, using too many words to express something. In the case of the thesis statement we are analyzing here, all words seem to be necessary with the exception of the final phrase. As we know, "electronic mail" is no longer an expression in use. It's been decades since it has been replaced by the shorter version "email", "e" standing for "electronic". Not only does using "electronic mail" make the sentence wordy, it also makes it sound old-fashioned.
Answer:
Animal Farm is considered an allegory because the specific characters, events and situations that were portrayed in the story actually stand for other characters, events and situations which are used in order to make a point or teach a lesson about them.
Explanation:
If I'm not mistaken, it was Carla Mason (not sure tho)
Answer:do not to leave school
Explanation:so later on if one person acts you a qustion about school you would now