I might be wrong, but I think the error is the way they spelled okay. When you are writing in an essay or any other forms of writing, I think you’re supposed to spell the word out instead of abbreviating it.
I hope this helps :)
It is a FACT because it is a true statement.
In scenario 1, the character dyes her hair pink, which is considered to be in a way deviant. The people in the society around her shows examples of being against her decision, like when the teacher sends her to the office.
Answer: You have to put the paragraphs in the question or we can't help you
Explanation: None of us have any idea what you're talking about without it