It should be removed from the editorial piece because it is repetitive to the rest of it pointing out the fact they we in the United States should get rid of nine-month calender's and continue with year-round schooling. Also in sentence 1) it should either be (help a student's achievement) or (help student's with their achievements)
The traits you are looking for is lack of rhyme and lack of meter. These two traits show that the entire poem is written in free verse.
One of your students left his book on the table
Subject verb disagreement
Reliable sources state the Americans that use social will have a more positive sense of community than Americans whom don’t use social media.