Music is an important element of a student’s education. One study says that schools with music programs had graduation rates of
about ninety-three percent. In schools without music programs, the graduation rate dropped to around seventy-two percent. Which sentence most effectively completes the paragraph?
This is just one example of the benefits schools get from offering music classes to their students.
A study from Columbia University says that music students have more self-confidence.
Schools should also think about adding other types of arts education, such as theater arts programs.
Some statistics note that music students score better on English and math standardized tests.
<span>Add: This is just one example of the benefits schools get from offering music classes to their students.
This sentence follow best because it references, specifically, offering music classes versus "music students" which is inaccurate. It implies there are other benefits beyond just graduation rate, which most would agree there are (cultural, etc).</span>