In general you want to be a bit more concise in forming a thesis statement. Usually you should shoot for between 1 and 2 sentences summarizing your argument in a concise way so that it is easily understandable to the reader. I would take what you have written and look for your main argument and try and put that in 1 to 2 sentences.
Frederick Douglass wrote an autobiographical slave narrative.
Revising the claim to make it more specific
<u>Part A</u>
The way that imagery affects the poem is by emphasizing the responsabilities of freedom.
The correct answer is A. The speaker names all the conditions that he thinks a free country and society has to have in order to awake, to break free.
<u>Part B</u>
The phrase from the poem that best illustrates the answer in part A is C: "clear stream of reason".
