Shi Huangdi was an effective leader because he was the first Chinese emperor that managed to unite the northern China and responsible to the first development of China's great wall.
Not only that, he is also the one that introduces China to the usage of money as a medium of transaction.
They viewed it as a new world where they could create things for themselves, and that way they could gain their simple human rights.
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