Question

Read the sentence. She loves novels, she would like to read more of them. Edit the sentence to correct the comma splice. Because she loves novels she would like to read more of them. She loves novels and she would like to read more of them. She loves novels she would like to read more of them. She loves novels, and she would like to read more of them.

Answer 1

She loves novels, and she would like to read more of them. 

Answer 2

Answer:

The revised version of the sentence above would be the following one: She loves novels, and she would like to read more of them.

Explanation:

You should use a comma before any coordinating conjunction that joins two independent clauses. In this case, the coordinating conjunction and is bringing together "she loves novels" and "she would like to read more of them". That is why the option with the comma before the conjunction is the correct choice.

The sentence with the subordinating conjunction lacks a comma after the dependent clause, then there is an example of a a run-on sentence (she loves novels she would like...), and one sentence just like a the correct choice but without the comma before the conjuction.