Question

Can someone edited my essay and help me write a conclusion on why United should have enter WW1 this is what I have so far.

Answer 1

WWI did have positive impacts for certain groups of people.

On January 28, 1915, Germany sank and damaged America's first Merchant ship this is the main justified reason for America to enter war with Germany. The German Captain Reinhan Hargeden ordered the destruction of the American ships that killed over 1,959 passengers and crew. 1.198 people were drowned including 128 Americans, Germany didn't just sink 1 American ship they also sank 5.000 more. At the end of March Germany continued to sink more American ships with passengers aboard, Germany caused many Americans to lose their lives In this great catastrophe. The Germans did not give off a warning that they were sinking ships. In my opinion America was justified for Intervening in WWI because of that negative event Germany did to them.

By the United States fighting in WWI created positive impacts for certain groups of people. As the result of the U.S. joining the war in 1916, industry started booming in America. More employment opportunities open up for African Americans and women.

Admandant and the Women became the main population in factories and African Americans migrated to the cities to find jobs. The finances of the public, which had been poor since the recession of 1097, improved. The 19th