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The thesis statement<span> is the sentence that states the main idea of a writing assignment and helps control the ideas within the paper. It is not merely a topic. It often reflects an opinion or judgment that a writer has made about a reading or personal experience.</span>
Since it's declarative, it ends with a period. We should add some commas as well.
<em>S</em>chool began on a cold<em>,</em> <em>S</em>eptember morning<em>.
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That should work.
It means she does something that will cause havoc and chaos in the community
