Story Map of Two Friends

inysia [295]

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2 years ago

Fix any mistakes in the following passage and retype it:

satela [25.4K]

Jefferson school is a very unique school. It has its ups and downs. From staff to the youngest students, we all are our own people and are one family. Although Jefferson school is a great school, there are several changes that could be made to change our school for the better. We could fix our school by changing the dress code, not overworking students and focusing on the students themselves, not their grades.

Through the 9 years i've been here, Jefferson schools has changed their rules several times. From accepting hoodies to banning them, because mostly the students abused the use of hoodies. Other rules have been the same since the beginning of time, like not wearing black. But one problem with the rules is the dress code. The school limits the students to what they can wear and what they can’t. This causes students’ creativity to be limited too. Every student wearing the exact same thing causes dullness. Wearing uniform or having a dress code is reasonable for any school, but to the point where students can’t express themselves isn’t okay. To be fairly honest, the school is limits the students themselves. I think the school should change certain things in the dress code, like letting students wear black and or letting them wear hoodies. Little changes can make big differences, so let these little changes make a difference in our school.

One thing this school needs to focus is not overworking the students. I know this school is known for its academics but overworking students is not okay at all. Teachers tell us that they “understand our pain” everyday but still tend to give out homework. Logically, I know that getting rid of homework is almost as impossible as removing uniform, but some changes can be made, like lessening the homework by a large amount. Lessening the homework will have a great effect on your students. Some students grades will change with the decrease in homework, while other students will get an increase in sleep with is good for both their physical and mental health. We’ve all heard when a student tells the teacher they didn’t have time to do their assignment, because they were busy studying for an assignment or doing another assignment for another class. One teacher told my class that they “would rather give more than less” ,meaning that they want to give more information than they need to give us. Giving a student more work than they need is too much, isn’t it? Do you want your students overworkerd? That’s the question.

This problem is within most schools, but it’s a big problem in ours. Academics are considered very important in this school. Our school seems to only care about how well the students do. From Science Fair to The art reflections, Jefferson wants to be the best in everything. There’s no problem with that. What’s wrong is that pressure is pushed on to the students. I feel like the school thinks that if the students work hard, the school will improve a lot. But all this work, with insanely large amounts is not going to work at all. Together the school must find another way for the students to learn without too much stress or too much pressure. Hopefully we do find a way.

With its many problems, Jefferson schools is still the one and only. Although it’s not perfect, it’s doing the best it can and as a student, I will very thankful and grateful toward my school. However, I love this school and all, but it need changes such as changing the dress code, not overworking the students, and less focusing on their grades. Maybe after these changes, our school will be better than before."

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3 years ago

Which action best illustrates how the media can influence public opinion in the United States

docker41 [41]

Answer:

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Explanation:

The broadcast media influences public opinion in the US by being biased, not reporting all of the news but only reporting what they want the public to know, and by reporting false news. The entertainment media influences public opinion because too many people believe that what they see on television or in the movies is real.

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3 years ago

In American society, romantic love is considered the main reason for people to marry. On the other hand, in some societies, roma

Slav-nsk [51]

The question is referring to a contrast so the proper phrase would be "on the other hand". This phrase means something along the lines of "looking at the other side" which refers to the other situation or event.In fact means giving a true exampleIn other societies means examples of ideas from other placesFor example is just giving an exampleHope this helped :)

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3 years ago

Poetry Writing:<br> 'Rise when you fall'

Novay_Z [31]

Rise and Fall

Firm as a rock and more cruel than a Barbarian was this fellow

He was a horrid and tenebrous master

The crown prince of Raptor the undefeated kingdom

He made many plans and all were costly

Soon he became as poor as a beggar

So a wedding became his solution out of debt

The prince wed the wonderful Etta from the kingdom of Tep and soon became king after he murdered his father in such brutal matter, he was a barbaric being and such thing was a fact

After a while he had a daughter, and a creature with a green complexion and human features asked for his daughter that he may be wed to her when she was all grown

However the Prince who was now King did not delight in such a matter and threw the creature out of his castle and cast him out of his kingdom

The creature swore to have the girl as a bride and to leave the King in ruin

In the meantime the king drank and enjoyed himself like a hummingbird

He pleased himself in torturing men and women alike and pleased himself in having multiple women, he was like an animal

However, soon came the day when the baby girl was now 18 years of age

She would dream of monsters and all sorts of creatures and she was drawn to them, she was a woman of visions

She would frequently dream of a green fellow who had human characteristics yet his face was abnormal yet she drew a liken to him

In a day like any other she went outside the castle and heard a beautiful flute playing so she followed the tune, it drove her out of the kingdom only to find the creature she dreamed of so much

When both saw each other they embraced and tears flowed from both cheeks

He asked from her, her hand in marriage and she accepted and afterwards they eloped

Now having taken the princess away and forming the scandal that it was with a horrendous creature the King would no longer receive benefit from Ettas parents

They no longer gave him silver coins to use it on the things he most desired, he was in ruin once more so due to desesperarían he took a dagger and plunged it into his heart

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3 years ago