Answer:
It looks like it is going to rain today there are a lot of clouds in the sky the sun is not shining i will play inside if it rains
Explanation:
Condense your writing and only keep the most important ideas. Also add punctuation.
<u>Same sentence + punctuation:</u>
- It looks like it is going to rain today, there are a lot of clouds in the sky and the sun is not shining. I will play inside if it rains.
<u>Other </u><u>ideas</u><u>:</u>
- The cloudy sky makes it look like it's going to rain today, which means I'll have to play inside.
- The sun is hiding behind the clouds and I think it might rain soon, which means I will have to play inside.
- The cloudy sky threatens rain; I will have to play inside if it begins to rain.
(I think you should use a semicolon (;) in the last sentence, not a colon (:) but I may be wrong)
Dear friend.
I am writing this letter because I woke up missing you so much and I couldn't help but tell you how important you are, not only to me, but to everyone who loves you here in Nepal.
For this reason, I believe it is time for you to return to your land and the people who love you. You've been away for so long, I believe you're missing it too and want to see and live with your people.
Your family is growing, your country is growing and it would be a shame you weren't here to witness it all and live in the culture that is truly yours.
However, I don't want to pressure you into making this decision. I know that everything happens at the right time and at the right and appropriate time you will decide to go home. I hope this happens soon, as I really wanted to see you.
With love
M.S.
I am fairly certain the answer you are looking for is false. Hope this helps
