Answer:
I think its alliteration
Explanation:
im not 100% sure sorry if its wrong
A hook is used in the "introduction" to interest the reader in what he is going to read in the following paragraphs.
Well, I can't do it for you since the teacher will tell (trust me this has happened to me) that it's not your work but I can revise it and make sure it is a healthy short story.
She was meant for a blissful time on an Earth that valued life and where she could be happy.