Look at the rhymes and the number of stanzas. Also you can try to figure out the meaning of the poem and the connecting it has to the author.
Answer:
the first one, when it says when we were there, it's missing a comma behind when
Answer:
Yes, I would personally find it unusual if I saw a blind many carrying a lamp but I would also think that he has his own reasons for doing so.
Explanation:
If you are referring to the story in which a blind man was carrying a lamp and a group of kids were making fun of him, then yes, most people would find this situation unusual. But as the blind man explained, the lamp is for other people to not run into him and push him on accident, and not for him per se. So we shouldn't judge people and their actions before we know why they're doing what they're doing.
May I lightheartedly suggest that the first step is “Know Thyself?” What do you think your story is and why would you want to tell it?
