I think that a good thesis statement would help and creative hooks to keep the writer hoook and not get bored and keep reading the story. Also add transition words to connect ideas in the creative writting.
Answer:
I think that the second option is better.
Explanation:
By using the second option, you are showing that you are directly quoting from the book itself, but the first option sounds like you are creating this dialogue yourself, which is wrong.
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To be completely honest with you I really don’t know
A, I think because you need to be more specific