Im 5’3
but some how i feel as tall as a tree.
I think alot so my mind is never free.
I love to draw
And drink water out of metal staws
I care about the earth
And I’ve been a really kind person ever since my birth.
Anwer: I would say that you have a thesis it's just that you could add more detail to it.
This is what I would say:
It was a cold, dark Saturday evening. I was reading my favorite book (enter here), when I heard sirens wailing outside my house. I got up from the couch, curious to see what was going on.
Extra Notes:
I would also add on to your story about about what you saw outside of your window.
Hope this helps (:
1. it moves as not great god i'd rather be
or hear old triton blow his wreathd horn. not 100% but pretty sure
I’m assuming this is true or false . answer false